WRITE To the Heart of the Matter: Have You Read Any Good First Sentences Lately?

Wired for Story
The Writer's Guide to Using Brain Science to Hook Readers from the Very First Sentence
by Lisa Cron

Anyone who has heard me speak about writing know my passion for first sentences.  First sentence do not a book, chapter or paragraph make, but it can be the deal breaker if it puts the reader to sleep.

Imagine my delight when I saw the title for this new book by Lisa Cron.  Like any good reader, I flipped to the back cover, skipped the endorsements, and checked out the book details. Not only was there going to be action on first sentences, there was also a promise to "ignite the brain's hardwired desire to learn what happens next."

I turned to the first page and read:

"In the second it takes you to read this first sentence, your senses are showering you with over 11,000,000 pieces of information. Your conscious mind is capable of registering about forty of them."

I fell in love with the first sentence and the layout of the page spread.  The left page showed THE COGNITIVE SECRET..."We think in story, which allows us to envision the future," and THE STORY SECRET..."From the very first sentence, the reader must want to know what happens next."

Above the chapter heading was the Flannery O'Connor quote: "I find that most people know what a story is until they sit down to write one."

Every chapter follows the same format. Cron writes what every writer needs to know and shares in a way every writer wants to write. I knew I was in the right place and reading the right book

Looks like my Christmas gift list for my writer just grew a little bit longer.

To find out more about Cron, visit wiredforstory.com.

WRITE to the Heart of the Matter: A Memoir of Art and Creation

Just Kids
by Patti Smith

I love to read memoirs, biographies, and, of course, family histories.  I am irresistibly drawn to hear each person's story.  I share in their struggles, their day to day activities and enjoy seeing how they overcome their obstacles.  Of course it is easier when you know their life will be a great success, especially since they have written a book about it.

When I decided to read, or rather listen to, Patti Smith's book "Just Kids," I knew nothing of her life's struggles and successes.  I knew she was a songwriter/musician. I never listened to her music. If you had asked me the title of one of her songs, I wouldn't have been able to name one. As I started her book, I did not know what to expect.

I discovered Patti Smith is brutally honest.  About her life, her loves and her choices.  I also would have never guessed that this rock star was so well read. Now I know she is truly a poet and performer. What I discovered about her put me in awe of her accomplishments.

Patti's book tells of her life, focusing on a story of love and creativity. While  I knew little about her, I knew absolutely nothing about the other half of the "Just Kids" title, Robert Maplethorpe.  Robert and Patti journeyed through life creating art, being art and living art.  They struggled together, lived together and developed their talents in parallel careers. Their dedication to art and to each other outlasted their time together. As I said, it is a story of love, but that does not make it a love story, at least not in the conventional sense.

I was familiar with the Chelsea Hotel, and it turns out Patti lived there for years. The parade of celebrities who passed through this hotel made it the epicenter of Patti's link to the artistic world she so desperately sought after for years. From Jimi Hendrix to Janis Joplin and Grace Slick, many of the people who frequented the Chelsea Hotel also influenced Patti and helped her along the way. 

Struggles were plenty. And, Robert's creations are not a match for my artistic taste. There are times I wanted to yell at him to stop and change his direction, but there was no going back for him. Frustrating, just like real life. Yet, I could not stop listening to the book  What makes this story impossible to walk away from? The three human circumstances which drew me into the vortex are:

1. How they bonded and lived for art and, in turn, inspired each other to live their dream.
2. How they grew their art and developed themselves into artists. 
3. How they tried and continued and failed and tried and continued again and again before any true success came their way.

I still hear their voices clearly in my mind. Patti's powerful yet simple words haunt and hang in the air. The book made me believe I was there and saw it all happen. They were "Just Kids" and I am grateful Patti shared her and Robert's story with the world. Now I am going to listen to her music.

WRITE to the Heart of the Matter: Writing

Several short sentences about writing
by Verlyn Klinkenborg

A few weeks ago, I wanted to read something different from my recent fictional and biographical fare. The book was to be read on an airplane so I also wanted to travel light. I found this book at the library and loved its simplicity. The cover is simple, clean and clear.  I choose well.

I started to read and was amazed at the SHORT SENTENCES.  Short, powerful sentences.  These sentences offer a depth of writing skill and understanding that others would have required pages or chapters to generate.

Klinkenborg is one of those influential people with whom I was unfamiliar. He has great credentials as a member of the New York Times Editorial Board and teacher. He has spent years writing boiling down the essence of a thought to a simple sentence. He had the insight to write:

"Everything in this book is meant to be tested all over again, by you.  You decide what works for you. This is perhaps the most important thing I have to say....Part of the struggle in learning to write is learning to ignore what isn't useful to you and pay attention to what is. If that means arguing with me as you read this book, so be it."  Klinkenborg, Prologue.

That said, I felt no need to argue.  This book's poetical style uplifted and inspired me with every turn of the page.  I could feel how I write and how I could improve it simply by following Klinkenborg's words.  I read the book over two weeks ago, and I am ready to enjoy the experience again.

If you are a writer and also on my Christmas list, I'm sorry you won't have any surprises when you open your gift this holiday.  Yes, it's that good.

Write to the Heart of the Matter: Biography

Life
by Keith Richards
with James Fox

As you are aware, I love audio books. I listen to them on my daily commutes which expands my "reading" time immensely.

When I started my biography kick last fall, one of the first ones I read was by Keith Richards who I still mistakenly refer to as Keith Richard. I thought the book would fill some time since it was 16 discs. However, I soon discovered it did much more than fill a time gap.
Voice is obviously everything in audio. Richards pulls in the best. Johnny Depp voices the story with support from Keith and Joe Hurley. I could listen to these voices again and again and again.

I love the way Keith describes the creative process. While he applies it to songwriting, the process applies to everything in Life.  He recalls:

"The famous day when Andrew locked us in a kitchen in Wellesden and said, 'Come out with a song"--that did happen. Why Andrew put Mick and me together as songwriters and not Mick and Brian, or me and Brian, I don't know...And I said, 'If we want to get out of here, Mick, we better come up with something.'

We sat there  in the kitchen and I began to pick away at the chords...'It is the evening of the day.' I might have written that. 'I sit and watch the children play.' I certainly wouldn't have come up with that. We have two lines and an interesting chord sequence, and then something else took over somewhere in this process. I don't want to say mystical, but you can't put your finger on it. Once you've got that idea, the rest of it will come.  It's like you've planted a seed, then you water it a bit and suddenly it sticks up out of the ground and goes, hey, look at me." (Richards, pg. 142-3).

My favorite discovery in this book is how Keith lives now and how he loves his library.

"I lead a gentleman's life.  Listen to Mozart, read many, many books.  I'm a voracious readers. I'll read anything...The Nelson era and World War II are on the top of my list, but I do the ancient Romans, too, and a certain amount of the British colonial stuff, the Great Game and all that. I have a fine library furnished with these works, with dark wooden shelves reaching to the ceiling." (Richards, pg. 522-3).


I grew up listening to the Stones, hearing about them on the news, and thought I knew quite a bit about Keith Richards.  I didn't.  However, I learned much more as I listened to this book.  And, I liked what I heard.  I think you will, too.

Write to the Heart of the Matter: Biography

Catherine the Great, Portrait of a Woman
by Robert K. Massie

For the past four months, I have been immersed in biographies. From Keith Richard to Regis Philbin, from Carol Burnett to Carrie Fisher, I have been in a gravitational pull toward biographies of all kinds. This one is of exceptional interest to me since my heritage is German Russian.

Like many of us with this ancestry, I have read a number of books about Catherine the Great. I didn’t think there was much more I could learn about her life. And,I wouldn’t have considered reading another Catherine book except for two reasons.

First, my daughter told me about this new book. I was impressed that she heard about it, so I checked out the link she forwarded to me. It was an NPR interview with the author, Robert K. Massie, entitled “First she read, then she ruled.” This phrase accurately described Catherine’s life and I hoped the headline would inspire others to devote more time to reading. You can listen to the interview at www.npr.org/2011/11/05/141992986/catherine-the-great-first-she-read-then-she-ruled.

Second, as I listened to the interview, I realized I had read two other books by Massie: Nicholas and Alexandra and Peter the Great. These books were my first introduction to Russian history in the ‘70s and ‘80s. So, despite not planning to read another book about Catherine, Massie’s book intrigued me and I had to read it. I am glad I did.

Massie weaves together the lives of families, friends, and enemies of the Russian court, and makes the complicated and treacherous political maneuvers easily understandable. He builds full personalities of all the major players in Catherine’s life. Their motives, favors and eccentricities are well documented and balanced without making caricatures of them. His details guide the most knowledgeable Catherine fans to deepen their understanding of her life. Massie crafts complete personalities without fictionalizing or creating a textbook version of her life.

Due to his thorough research, Massie deftly builds a three dimensional character out of one of the saddest people in Catherine’s life, her husband, Peter III.

Peter, the pro-Prussian Prince of Holstein-Gottrop, is normally portrayed as an inept, pompous and cruel individual. While these attributes cannot be denied, Massie broadens the perspective of Peter. After his bout with smallpox, he returns to the palace and sees Catherine for the first time since his skin has been scarred. When he realizes how repulsed she is by his appearance, he is embarrassed and retreats from her. Massie evokes sympathy for Peter in this brief scene yet it does not change one’s overall opinion of him.

There are not direct references to Catherine’s Manifesto inviting Germans to settle in the Volga area, however, it is not a reason to miss this book. Massie has captured the essence of her life and survival. Her role, which was instrumental to our ancestors and to our own existence, is a worthwhile read. It is one of the best vehicles to bring a new generation to our unique history. As I mentioned, my daughter told me about the book. Isn’t that why we research and learn our history? To pass it on to our children? I am blessed to have had my daughter pass this story on to me.

Massie says he will miss Catherine after spending over eight years with her. I read the book this past month, shed tears at the end, and already miss the time I spent with her. You will, too.